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Poem Number 4210
Passive aggressive
Mixed signals being received
Pillows or armor
Commentary:
his lips were saying
something his heart is
yet to understand
.
his hands were
asking yet in his
eyes lay demand
.
years of practice he
much too old and I too young
fallen..I must be stong
.
dra....
horrible haiku..:)
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not at all, dra. I think your first one, especially, was excellent. How often we speak before we really understand what we are saying! ~Q~
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