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Poem Number 4197
fair time--when's Fair time?
art works entered (may she win)
competitions steep
judges view today
they know her horses, portraits
they have grown with her
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five blue ribbons won
one we thought best got second
still didn't make State
win , place, show
me your tits , and shut ur mouth u dun have a choice in this i payed my $50000 dollars now at least do something usefull u dumb bitch


Commentary:
She was disappointed that her art work didn't make the state fair yet.
Perhaps, now, she will try her best instead of "craming" art works two
weeks before fairtime. I entered a poem about a friend's grandfather
dying, with an amateurish two willow trees "drawn" on Thisthing. I
expected nothing but a free poster pass, for an extra trip to the fair
and "Surprise!" I won a red ribbon on it.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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poetry contest~
realized too late it wasn't
meant for amateurs..............~Q~

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~Q~::There is certainly nothing amateurish about your poetry. We should
all be such amateurs.--MommaThing--May you know love!
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If i could only write like you two...:)V
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Congrats GT. It always a blessing when they like the work one does and acknowledge it. A red ribbon is as good as all the gold in the universe I think. Way to go....m4r
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Thank you all. GT
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