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Poem Number 4185
Motion is motion
Forgot the laws of physics
Big kiss on pavement
Commentary:
Tried to rekindle my youth on a skateboard tonight. The road won I think....m4r
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:) enjoyed this one m4r.. remember when I tried my son's skateboard a few years ago... couldn't even get on it properly with two feet..alice
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big kiss on pavement
late night unbridled passion
glad no cars intrude....david
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long slow public kiss
all surroundings blotted out
nothing else exists....david
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Get a room!...~Green
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we took a room
(sneaking around her kids)
but got thrown out........................RAS ;-)
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well, it was past check out time....;) ~Q~
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checking out,
i thought, so that's what
it's called now........................RAS ;-)
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Pulsing neon sign
Makes red shadows through the blinds.
We match the rythm......................bkay
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thin threadbare matress
lumpy, concave, squeaky, stained
awaiting lovers....david
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hope it atleast had a clean sheet, david! LOL ~Q~
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Sheets? There're supposed to be sheets??.......bkay
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UUUUUMMMMM---satin sheets caressing the skin
as he begins caressing the ??????
Oh my, yes. Sheets can do wonders!--GrandmaThing
--May you know much love!
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MMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmm I love it when he caresses the ?????? ~Q~
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!!!!!!.....bkay
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Mmm hmmm yep, love it. ~Q~
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Love how this went from a skateboard accident to satin sheets. Whish I had of landed on them instead. The color purple would look better on them than on me....m4r
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nude stranger beckons
secret seedy adventure
hide truth forever....david
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by the way, grandma...i'm shocked! didn't expect you to mention the ??????...david
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hey David...getting your sunblock ready for your adventure? I bet you can hardly wait! ~Q~
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yeah. we have about 12 people in my theme camp. we will have large sculptures made of lights and i think a large mural. we will also be offering to paint people's bodies. it will be a blast. we have a fun, creative, diverse group at our camp. thanks for helping whet my appetite again...david
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All the sudden I'm starting to feel hungry too! ...~Green
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