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Poem Number 4171
ocean waves that dance
sea breeze interrupts the heat
vast world to float on
A butterfly trembles
too far out over the waves
a fish misses--and goes back
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Deena Larsen--last three lines.
This is a great site, a wonderful community builder.
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Classic???--Am I wrong or did someone just have another birthday. Hope it
was a very happy one. Very original new ID.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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yada yada yada....... i'm also guessing GT that soon we'll be seeing a GT66, but your being here also lets us know that our age isn't a factor here. its our state of mind, and where our hearts are at that makes the difference......bless you....and all....classic
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Not till Sep but hush, hide the extinguishers or the candles will make a
fire hazzard. Thanks, Classic41 from nearly GT66--May you know love!
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