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Poem Number 4168
It's Masculine Risk
Frightened Frantic Pilgramage
Shall I Write It Down?
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Given Over Bitterness
Washed in your snow melt clear stream
Cleansed in loving grace
Commentary:
breathlessly beautiful.
Juarnee
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on second thought--maybe sad is a better word. I'm eager to read more from you.
Jurnee
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