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Poem Number 4160
Monday Morning
that's not enough syllables!
Oops - too many!


Commentary:
Summer vacation
I still hustle my children
out the door early

lunchboxes packed
neither of them wants
the Scooby-doo

neighborhood carpool
I thought I was driving but
they pile in her car

rushing to work
the truck in front of me
needs directions

on the "expressway"
traffic is moving at
5 miles per hour

Truckdriver~
yesterday's pizza
for breakfast

On Monday morning
a elder couple takes
their Sunday cruise

finally at work
I collapse into my chair
the phone starts ringing

I answer cheerfully
the juice from a nectarine
running down my chin...........~Q~
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lol, baby - nicely painted! You just answered the questions I asked in my last email..............RAS
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pool closed
cant swim today
bummer........:(V
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mowing time
the grass grows so fast
yard looks nice.......:(:V
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wait up
just another
bite,please...:)V
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rainy day
cool and wet - must be
the weekend.................................RAS
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Thats what the lawn mower said when we quit mowing....:)V
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With my off the wall schedule,normal(SATURDAY/SUNDAY)weekends
are treasured...even with the rain.I like playing in the rain
sometimes.
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Oops i forgot to sign my name...:)V
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Schedule? Schedule??
I don't have to give you no
Estinking schedule!..............bkay, retired, self-employed, living rural, still drinking coffee, thinking about maybe going out to shoot some photos. Or go to Flagstaff. Think I'll have another cup of coffee.....
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Hey bkay, i'm looking to hire a babysitter ;) ~Q~
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Well, Q, that's not really among my many, varied skills, but I'll think about it - while I'm having another cup of coffee.......bkay
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cup of coffee
contemplating the day
another cup...:)V
...
This one's for you bkay...cheers...:)V
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coffee
her tip depends on
your warmth............~Q~
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Coffee? Oh, thank God!
Please just hook it up to my
IV, thank you Hon..................bkay (and thanks, V)
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taken outdoors
that first scalding sip
so much better........................RAS, another addict
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Ran out of coffee
Filters, ran to Pathmark at
Two in the morning
~O~ Coyote Moon ~O~
(coffee addict and Starbucks employee)

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