As the red sun sets
Pastel colours fill the sky
Like blood of the day.............................~Steph~ aged 12
The black cloud covers
the face of the sun who knows
which is on the run

the sunset
aches to please our eyes
bleeding forth.............~Q~
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sunrise
eastern sky engorged
with skyblood........................RAS
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Sunsets are the blood
Of wounded gods and the clouds
Are their bandages............bkay
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burnt orange
the sun sets,weary
from days work...:)V
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sunset;
the sky
bleeds........ginny
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blood red moon
my children repent
of their sins...........~Q~
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lunar eclipse
the full moon overhead
turning to ash..........................RAS
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solar eclipse
a black hole in the sky
swallows the sun.............................RAS
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Steph,
Well done! I like it and from one so young. No offense I just wish I could
have written like that when I was 12. If I may use your first two lines and
add a different end.
(As the red sun sets)
(Pastel colours fill the sky)
(The Earth bleeds again)
By Steph with opto just adding his two cents. Keep up the good work Steph!!
opto
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Thanks Opto!
I am happy you liked it, I also love your last line!
Can't wait to read more of your haikus,
~Steph~

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~Steph~
Your welcome. It was easy. Thanks for letting me add my two cents.
If you want go up to Author Search, type in opto and you can read some of
my old stuff. You could also type in my other handgle mgm and read some
of those. Keep on writing and sharing here. You are good.
opto
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Farid--I know this is your first poem here and welcome with us. Always pleased
to share these pages with friends. Hey, folks for a first time here this is
very good writing. --GrandmaThing--May you know love!

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Stephanie: I hope you write here more often but figured I was being reduntant.
Farid is a messenger friend and this is his first time writing. Hope you
don't mind sharing your space.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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Farid: If you come here looking for your brand new poem I was afraid
this might happen. Sorry I didn't think of it last night. Just go to
the end of a page and re-post it by yourself. It is too good not to
have other readers viewing it.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!