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Poem Number 4150
Flame now dusty words
Stir us with shivering sounds
Fire-breath syllables


Commentary:
bathing
in the smoke
of sage...............~Q~
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...the pit
hickory
hot dogs...:)V
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the pit
opens its mouth
for me..............~Q~
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...reach in
careful,he might
bite you...:)V
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The Pit~
my eternity
in darkness.......~Q~
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darkness
hungry for
my soul...........~Q~
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my soul
craving the light
too late...:)V
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regretting
the bullet already
in my brain............~Q~
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fading
into midnight
afraid...:)V
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holding
myself throughout
the night.............~Q~
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...whats that
i her something
laughter...?V
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oh God
could this be hell
please no...:)V
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a child's torment
trying to fathom how long
is forever?...................~Q~
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her pain
everlasting
but why...:)V
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a question
i stopped asking long
ago ~ "Why?".................~Q`
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