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Poem Number 4149
'Lemme take a toke
hopes and dreams drift in the air
Man! This is good shit!
Commentary:
my face grows
it has become quite
enormous
now my hands
they continue to
grow larger
people are
staring, they see how
huge i am
like Godzilla
stomping through the village
(this is good shit?)..................;) ~Q~
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...Flying
touching the ground
falling...:)V
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the colors
brighter; the music
truly heard
.
hidden meaning
in their words - secretly
laughing at me
.
reverie
tuned to internal
imagery
.
confused
conversation
forgot..............................RAS
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revelations
so profound they must
be shared
i am inside
a braincell, a memory
i am inside
a memory
sitting in a braincell
this is my now
this is my
forever, trapped here in
a braincell
the thought
seemed so profound
at the time..............~Q~
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my sentence
crumbles into dust
like a dream
.
that must be
the funniest joke
ever told!
.
food of the gods -
milk and a whole bag of
vanilla cremes.........................RAS
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Hey man this is so
Cool I mean like you know hey
What day is this, dude?...........bkay
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well you know
it's like...what were we
talking about?.........................RAS
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excuse me,
Sir, may i give you
the time? ................~Q~
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I had the time once
But, as you can see, my watch
Has melted again................beeeeeeeekkkkaaaaaayyyyy
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LMAO.... I'm enjoying the hell out of these... keep 'em coming..... (now where are those Doritos?).........ginny
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Doritos
A toke and a brew
Paradise...:)~(:
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Doritos, like Oh My God, Doritos, Dori's toes, toes, Oh My God, what if they're made of toes? Like, what if we are eating toes? Wow. We could be, you know. We could be eating toes. Wow man, look at my toes. Oh My God, where are my toes? ..............just~Q~
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The Academy:
Burn Mary Jane, learn the smell.
"Got it yet?" "No, man!".........bkay
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coughing fit
perfectly good toke
wasted
.
suddenly
coltrane's master plan
lays revealed
.
what fun
to play with
the dog..........................RAS
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coughing fit
perfectly good toke
wasted
.
suddenly
coltrane's master plan
lays revealed
.
what fun
to play with
the dog..........................RAS
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dammit, haven't done that in a while! Must be something in these brownies........RAS ;-)
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Brownies?? You've got brownies you're not sharing???.............bkay
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all the answers
on the tip of my tongue
oops, i swallow.......petelf
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Everyone to RAS' house for brownies (hehe and I have his address). Petelf, don't you know you're not supposed to swallow...or inhale? ....~Q~
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pretty li'l mushrooms
how the world swirls into
colors with each bite..............~Q~
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shroom pie
dont fly away
from me......:)V
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just a little bit
before watching the parade
much more interesting....david
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sitting quietly
absorbing all stimuli
talking too much work....david
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county fair
surrealistic
encounters..............................RAS
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one hitter
he tries to eat my
daughter's toy...............~Q~ (for RAS)
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anticipation
wait for that familiar word
fin'ly it comes--"ear"....david
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hey man, like what's
that thing called on the
side of your face?................ RASQ
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