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Poem Number 4144
With the death of light
The images flow in blind
Orgasmic fury.
......bkay
Commentary:
Whew, bkay, I've been meditating on this for 20 minutes. As quickly as I tend to come up with improptu ku-ish comments, I can't think of any words, only visions. And, yes they are flowing with orgasmic fury. Thanks for the trip. ~Q~
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...the light dims
shadows fade 'way
gentle touch...
:)V
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tenderly
your fingertips brush
against mine..................~Q~
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As wingtips of hawks
Courting, as auras of two
Stars in pas de deux..........bkay
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the whisper
of fabric sliding
across skin
.
sacred warmth
our naked bodies
embracing
.
how i long
to explore her form
with my hands!.....................RAS (missing you, little one)
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deep in the forest
upon our floral bed, the
chipmunks also play...............~Q~
spirit totems
the moose and the bear
standing guard
primal insticts
one with each others
and the earth................~Q~
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sunlight
warms my back, the moss
cools yours
.
overhead
songbirds celebrate
our union
.
afterwards
i pick wildflowers
for your hair........................RAS
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There you young ones go again-reminding me of my youth when I traversed
the world of young love! Such sweetness in memory!--GrandmaThing--May you know much love.
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bkay,
All I can say is WOW!!! This one is fantastic!!!
I love it.
opto
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