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Poem Number 4140
remembering
the cords around my wrists
the dark closet
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Commentary:
from a distance
the sound of approaching
footsteps, closer

closer, the door
opening to reveal
the devil's face..............just~Q~
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the devil
corrupting loved ones
from within........................RAS
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from within
the "tape recorder"
continues...........~Q~
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the fiend's coup -
casting guilt upon
the victim.....................RAS

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her midnight sobs
shake our bed reliving
the violence........................RAS
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...dont look
into his
cold eyes...V
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his eyes
dark and cold like
his heart...............~Q~
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blackness
behind his eyes
where a soul should be....................RAS
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cannot
see the beacon
within......:)V
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beneath
his smile
an evil grin
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Closet door locked tight
Screaming darkness for release
Parents sound asleep
opto
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Closet door locked tight
Screaming darkness for release
Parents sound asleep
opto
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