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Poem Number 4138
Morning comes at last
I have had so little sleep
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Restless without you


Commentary:
did you fall asleep while writing this (grin)? i assume you'll write the final line when you wake up...david
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halfway open
my eyes reach for the moon
and find the sun......................~Q~ hope you find that last line soon, CM
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awakened
by my book crashing
to the floor.......................RAS
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How many syllables would there be in that long snore I wonder?
-Chikuba Madman *laughing*
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How many syllables
would it take till we knew
that too many poets
need rest?
The answer my friend
is written in this ku
the answer is written in this ku.....sorry guys, ~Q~, who is avoiding going into work today....
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that would be "know" ....q
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