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Poem Number 4132
his eyes, cold as ice
his ears, ignoring my pleas
as if unspoken
Commentary:
unable
to exhale beneath
his weight
unable
to scream beneath
his grip
unable
to cry beneath
the pain
unable
to heal, broken
again
~Q~
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