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Poem Number 4131
My heart lies broken
On the floor,trampled,ravaged
beneath hatred heel
Commentary:
trample me
but must your spiked heels
be so sharp?...................~Q~
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Sorry,i`ll take off the spiked heels...V
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Birkenstocks OK?.........bkay
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Sorry if i sound dumb,but what are Birkenstocks?
Sighned duh?!?! from guess where...you got it,the
computer....:)V
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Birkenstocks are a really comfortable sandal, made popular by hippies in the '60s...........bkay
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Birkenstock sandals
on the Green tortoise bus lines
I found your comfort....................~Q~ a late 70s hippie wannabe...
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Cool...:)V
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