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Poem Number 4130
No comments they had
Not a word,not a whisper
How am i to know?
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with a child's anguish
i pleaded to ears, deafened
by their own cold hearts.......~Q~
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Beautiful commentary,Thanx...:)V
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Vic:: I have been writing here for abt. 2 1/2 years & sometimes wonder if
there is anybody reading my words. I don't know if they like them or if I
have truly missed the mark, which, by the way is the true meaning of sin.
But, when I keep going back and enjoy reading my own works, too, I figure
they can't be too bad. We all show our hearts here once in a while.--
GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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Thank you GrandmaThing you are the greatest.
Thanks for the love you put into your words.
I had given up trying to write for too long.
Thank you and all the people who have allowed
me to be a part of these beautiful pages.
May you have a joyous day...:)V
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