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Poem Number 4125
chocolate is bad
it can make you very fat
why is it yummy? ~Stephanie~ aged 12


Commentary:
i could not help make a haiku (no matter how crappy,) about my one true love! ~stephanie~
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all things
in moderation
are good.................no poetry is crappy, stephanie! (Especially if it is written about your one true love). It's good to see you writing haiku at your age. My three daughters all write haiku, as well. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours....~Q~
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...oh that would be ~Q~ aged 37 :)
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Chocolate joy is fleeting
It's much like a stolen kiss
But what a way of greeting
My so very pretty miss
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~Chikuba Madman, not above doggerel at 37 :)
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My dad at ninety
Still loves Hershey's with almonds.
Worry not at twelve!...................bkay (age 61 and not counting)
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Thanxs all for your encouragement! I probably need it at this stage and age with all you BRILIANT writers out there!
thanxs so much all of you!
~Stephanie~......age 12!
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P.S
i LOVE your work and will always go to your work first Q Chikuba and Bkay!
~Steph~........age 12
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Sunrise, and fresh praise
From a young poet will make
My smile linger on............ Thanks, Stephanie, for making my day! bkay
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As I tell my daughters, (ages 14, 11, and 7), the key to adolescence is surviving it. God knows, poetry is how I survived mine. I understand the best writers are those who do a lot of reading. If your interest is in Haiku, Stephanie, perhaps we could recommend a few of our favorite ku books. I'm at work, so I don't have access to my "library," but I will take a peek for you when I get home. Just continue reading and writing, writing and reading and before you know it, we will be asking you for your autograph at your book signing. ~Q~
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Enjoy What Is Sweet
No Matter How Old You Are
Be Twelve Forever
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*Wide Grin* Chikuba Madman
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a Kiss
melts in your mouth
heaven...:)V
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Those Kiss chocolates are my favorites.I would eat them all
if i could.My kids love them too!!Enjoy your words.Thank you...:)V
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