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Poem Number 4115
How would it be if
Everyone with murder in
His heart were struck down?
......bkay
Commentary:
wow, an intense question. I suppose it depends on how you define murder. I think at sometime in everyone's life, we all feel hatred toward another person, enough to wish them dead. Is that having murder in your heart? OR is that having so much hurt that you just want the hurt to go away? There are two people who I have murdered in my heart...my mother and my ex-husband. Both tortured and tormented me for years and years. Did I really want them dead? No, I wanted the pain to stop. But to answer your ku-Question, it would be peaceful, quiet, maybe even silent. ~Q~
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wintery drive
how i wish he would
not return home..........~Q~
our children
their fearful eyes upon
the doorknob.......................~Q~
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~Q~,
Amid this life's pain,
You'll find no easy answers.
Live life to the full!
......bkay
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hatred corrodes soul
fixation intensifies
bitter angry wreck....david
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don't squander hatred
on entire groups of people
save for worthy few....david
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Innocence is lost
On seeing the first human
You know you will kill.
......bkay
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every summer
the ice cream truck's jingle
sings of his death.................~Q~
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screams for help
mingled with the sound
of gunfire
his fist print
painted in bloodstains
upon our door.................~Q~
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