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Poem Number 4113
Throbs tell of raw ache
Under breast with frantic cry
Shake beneath sea flood...~Green
Commentary:
focusing
she pulls in her breath
between sobs.................~Q~
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...the pain
crying eyes
they flow...:)V
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