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Poem Number 4078
shaved head, hairy chest
leather pants, aggressive stance
warm, shy, boyish grin


Commentary:
three tough looking boys
cigarettes, attitude, pouts
young baby faces....david
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fangs bared, ears pulled back
hunched low, gowls, stares, menaces
cute fluffy lap dog....david
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tiny scared school boy
lost in big clothes-slinks through school
clutches hidden gun....david
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fragrent colorful
harmless small flowering plant
devours resting fly....david
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friendly neighbor
upstanding citizen
wife hides bruises....ginny
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kindly grandmother
buys inexpensive items
costly ones in purse....david
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televangelist
tells us not to sin with greed;
his bank account grows........ginny
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politician smiles
"unity, community"
yet votes self-interest....david
(these are so fun and easy to write, aren't they ginny?)
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"Amazing grace"
the parking lot gets paved
children go hungry.....................these are all powerful statements, thanks david and ginny, ~Q~

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blushing bride in white...
hundreds smile remembering....
(mostly old boyfriends)....david
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