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Poem Number 3987
as drought thirsts for rain
man seeks out relief from pain
his children complain
But his world is not the same
In this world of stress and strain
Your a title not a name
Is society to blame?
Friends are scarce and love the same
Hence we must endure the pain
Commentary:
A rhyming Haiku. I like it. I can almost hear those children complain.
Well done.
opto
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