Night is a hymn
Where summer flowers sing
Too winter snow
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Magnolia winter
A swans nest of gossamer
White wings forever!
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Spring-rain, apple
Blossom-hoarding, seasoned
Bees-glade!
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Walnut winter
A squirrel garden, caretaker
Chestnut sleep!
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Lily white moon
A crocus spring wakes
A snowdrop!
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Summer salamander
Four toed wandering, warrior
kill me a sun!
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Lunar white bird
The winter moons echo is heard—
Migrating song & word,
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bladestar, these are lovely. I particularly like the lily white moon haiku. Just in passing, it is not usual to capitalize the beginning of each line....alice who also comes from just outside Manchester :)))
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thanx alice I'm not sure about this form of writing but its enjoyable so I'm glad there's something you liked about it? bladestar
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bladestar,
After reading these I feel a bit ignorant about my comments earlier. You
are quite good at writing these even if you are not sure about this form.
I would say you have gotten the knack and in a hurry. I enjoy your work
and hope to continue reading them here. Well done.
opto
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Thanx for your kind words opto I'll try some more again soon then :)