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Poem Number 3915
Old cat on the sill
Watching birds play in the snow
Knows his hunting's done.

......bkay


Commentary:
profound message, layers deep. Thanks bkay, ~Q~
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skip skid plop
stone from hand to sea
sun you me
...lazy@ss
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Right now I am feeling like that old cat, only in love not hunting,
Although maybe they are one in the same.
As stated layers deep and in my opinion well done.
opto
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