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Poem Number 3909
Spring flower
Summers white star
Lifes root
Commentary:
This is my first try at this form so plz say if this is following in the right traditions of haiku
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im not sure if its in the rite form but its still beautiful Laura
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Thank you Laura :)
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anytime....L
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bladestar,
It may not follow the 5-7-5 rule but I like it too. It flows and reminds
me of the coming of Spring. Keep writing and you will only get better.
opto
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Thanx opto I'll do that.
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