Dolphin smiles playful
waves pound angrilly and stop
silence now again

Anon:: This truly reminds me of the sea aquarium with the dolphins and killer
whales(sho don't usually kill). Very nicely said.--GrandmaThing--May you know love~!
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Thank you for your kind words. I am a lover of dolphins and wrote this hoping it might cheer me up--it did. I only wish there were more people like you out there to critique. Thank you. Sx_tiger.
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I know the feeling. Many times I get discouraged because I feel I'm alone here except
for one or two others who are faithful and do critique when they have time.
--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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i like it. It can be just the scene of a child's story or a deeper meaning. those poems, in my opinion are the best because mroe can relate. Laura