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Poem Number 3884
thoughts-(noun)-just little thoughts I finally figured I could put them into words-not quotes but THOUGHTS-I have a seperate little book for them.Tell me what you think or thought.heha p.s.-I didn't
know where to post them, there not poems and there not haikus but that's the closest I thought comments are greatly helping I guess I am asking you to comment on my thoughts. heha~Undaunted, in mind


Commentary:
1)What are you laughing at the original meaning or your perverse translation?
2)Why crowd the truth with a bunch of words?
3)When staring into your eyes there is no emotion just a black marble ricashaying(do not know how to spell this) off the walls.---I thought three was enough for now just to see if I should just do away with the whole idea
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Undaunted in Mind:: Nice to see you writing here. I have a comment for you.
Thoughts build into --poems, haiku or whatever you claim them to be.
Glad to have you with us.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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are you really a grandma it's all good to me but why do you always say that at the end of your comments?~Undaunted, in mind
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undaunted in mind:: Yes I am a grandma and great-grandma. I started using the
logo when I first started writing here. There was another lady who wished
everyone, "love,laughter and peace" and she was only writing a little while
and stopped writing. I missed that wish so I started my own.--GrandmaThing--
May you know love!
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Well that is REALLY sweet May you know Jesus and Love!~Undaunted, in mind
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Sorry I am not trying to steal your logo hope you do not mind just this once~Undaunted, in mind

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