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Poem Number 3865
so silent my heart
when you are away, I can
hear the world breathing
Commentary:
definately not haiku, but thought I'd write it anyway....alice
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Alice::So precious the nonsound of love not home. Is "nonsound" a word?
Who cares? This is lovely, Alice!--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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so precious nonsound
when your love is not at home
heart waits your return
^^
GrandmaThing--Thanks, Alice!
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