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Poem Number 3677
fathomless prisms
eyes become angry lenses
awaiting ambush
Commentary:
aloce, i keep reading this over and over and each time a different image appears from that prism...well done!!......bb
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oops, sorry alice...the italian got the better part of me there....bb
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:) any language is fine with me bb ;) glad you liked it.....alice
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Alice I liked this very much too but bb you gotta lay off the parmesan, them burps will kill ya, not to mention that they make you spell bad. lol ....m4r
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