Current poems in progress...

Am I wide asleep
I'm the dream grifter's real mark
Limbo is my home

Enjoyed. Truly brilliant.
What is reality. Could this life be Limbo?
IPP is your home. c-belle
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Thank you very much. I love haiku, it's nice to be able to express so much thought in such a short and sweet manner. JB
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Ah, JB! 'wide asleep' is excellent!! An enviable image. Lida Jo from Idaho.
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Moon surtck again! This time a great surtck with 3 components of question, resolution and journey. The never ending question with no resolution and the desire to want more and more (humans are never satisfied with what they have)and at the end of the day it leads to a long journey well, I assume a journey of life which is still way far from humans reach (the desired destination) to get wholly the satisfactions they look for. :)That's how I look at it. The poet knows best, the readers make assumptions or giving some critical appreciations. Love it! Keep going, man! :)

pictures of lily
Burned deep in my idle flesh
soothed my wonder years

A 17-syllable novel. Wish I could read the long version. LJ from ID
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A 17-syllable novel. Wish I could read the long version. LJ from ID

our midnight tango
consequence will soon be seen
takes two to tango

you're right. Three is just plain showing off.

Be that as it may
For they say that Truth will out
And God is seven

R2D2 said
Astro droids do it better
Ping Ping Ping Poing

The Jitterati
Parading Hoxton, Dalston,
I need: maps, caffeine!

Winter joy

Bleak winter morning
Color lost in maze of gray
Oh! A cardinal!

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One of the best haikus I've seen. I know what the winter day looked like. That sudden flash of red of the cardinal is like a ray of sunshine.
...BR
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Beautiful, BR!! Excellent understated elegance!! Can't Haiku better than that! Lida Jo from Idaho
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I didn't write this, I only commented on it. Wish I could claim it, but, I can't!
...BR

Seven red setters
Seen slowly stalking swaybacks

Today a poet
scarred me forever in verse
I may never heal

That last line is weak since if one is scarred forever one cannot heal.
Wish I had said:
may it serve me well
Lida Jo from Idaho
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You are an insightful self-editor, Lida Jo. --eritain
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It seems so good to see some new activity here. A few years ago it was a busy site.
...BR
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I love the "may it serve me well". -everywordmeanslove
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So good to be back to the folks that inspire my dribble, Bless You All.....classic38

This morning
Beneath the wiper blade
One crisp brown leaf
Sweeps back and forth

Great. Gives me the feeling of late Autumn in New Hampshire.
...BR
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Thanks for the comment BR
Late Autumn in New Jersey, you were so close :)

My lifes mistakes are
Finally behind me now
All thats left is life

Glad you've reached that point in life. Wish I could.
...BR

if i surrender
then a traitor`s born again
and the monster wins

feminism is
not obsolete when you talk
oblivious fool

clear pane separates
fierce elements from stale
air blocking lungs

Tired, poet sits
All day long, he racks his brain
fighting writer's block

Nothing much to say
full moon offers little help
Where are those words now?
..........classic38

coffee aroma
invigorates my body
hail the coffee god

Glad to see someone else reads these lines.
...BR

ping pong ping pong ping
sing song sing song sing song sing
ding dong ding dong ding

A long time ago
Creativity was clear
Now remnants remain

Infinite hope yields
Her green heart just out of reach
Past has no future

young swallowtail kite
fledgling weighs its wings in thought

Winters' grip has eased
Her best this year for damage
People come together