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Poem Number 811
watered down greyhound
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Commentary:
sometimes
kisses are like
little excuses
just like eventually
some houses will soon be
little fires
and it's hard to tell
what is worse
sometimes
losing my favorite couch
or
watching him grab your ass
while is sit patiently
sipping my very weak
and expensive
drink
.
.
-no one
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you make me want to be a bitter man.
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