Ring.................Ring Ring.................Ring

I just rang to say 'I love you' but the phone comes crashing down.
I only wanted a kind word to fall from your lips,
But that was to much to ask.
Your voice is no longer playful,
Evil fills your heart.
I just rang to say 'I love you' but the phone comes crashing down.
I plead to you not to hurt me,
But you tell me it's too late.
I have pushed you to far,
and you can no longer wait.
I just rang to say 'I love you' and the phone comes crashing down.
I sit hear in the darkness with no-one but myself,
this isnt love just cruelty.
And theres no-one on my side
I just rang to say 'I love you' but the phone is already dead.

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please tell me what you think?????????
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I like this-it's like a chant because you repeat the line "the phone comes crashing down". It's a powerful image. Who wrote this? Good stuff! JE
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I did.
--empty soul--
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Touching. Perhaps if you had spoken sooner...? But don't give up. Some people have to "hear" the words before they realize they care too.
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what if???????????????????????
we will never know what might of happened if we had taken another path.
What hurts the most is that i am with the guy who constantly hang up?
lifes a funny thing that i will never understand
--empty soul--