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Poem Number 1688
Is this what you've come to... writing hasty lines
on a far flung website just like pasties in a cockeyed burlesque
[question mark] looking through the wrong end of a glimmertunnel
with gin soaked gimlet eyes into the chunnel
vomiting bad rhyme in 4/4 time
make the drums come in strong!! can you feel it?
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feeling intensely, still inadequate at expressing - no mercy huh?
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nice ride - ""
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and lots o laughs - can't miss what was never mine
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