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Gothic/Surreal - Three


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Poem Number 1687
Donque
the blister on your soul,


Commentary:
a "Donque" is a BIG butt. no blisters, sorry. you know, unless...
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Surreal: so I expect there to be a fish and/or an eye.
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razor sharp
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if the butt's shoes are too tight there will be blisters, it's elementary dear..
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She who has the last dance has the last laugh:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=qdIXzSnKzAc&feature=related#

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a sharp fish?
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