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Gothic/Surreal - Three
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Poem Number 1678
ah sweet love
clinging to a child
grasp slipping
knowing forever
waits lonely
Commentary:
written for a step dad (notmine)
We who are enemies
find ourselves
on common ground
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the first piece is pretty; the second stark.
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both appeal :)
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your just being nice ..i can't even write one line of a simple verse anymore. ah well, spossin thats a good thing!
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they are both clear and somewhat inventive - just keep writing
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