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Gothic/Surreal - Three
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Poem Number 1663
bankrupt
Commentary:
a pill is not the answer
this machine is not a friend
so young and empty
you scare me
awash in negativity
you offer goblets
of dirty bath water
charitable champagne
mesmer's one good eye
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BUT,
Reflection + Ethics + Action = Thrival
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