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Poem Number 1636
if purple would break the silence
do not delay - for the weight of it is crushing
plush velvet upon us
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hello
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thanks,
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and then some?
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some what??
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that will have to do, i guess
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can't read your mind. a few words on a page don't say it all. why not explain?
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it's wierd that i could have someone on my mind -
who wouldn't have 2 nanosecs thought of me -
it just seems anti-law of conservation of energy :)
the reality is what is - computers are actually the only things predictable
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lots of things are predictable. you are predictable. keep track of your routines and you'll be surprised.
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okay - predictable, but not consistent
and i delight in surprise, so it is a good thing that computers are the only thing that responds exactly as programmed (making the exception, of course, for AI)
it is waiting for the exceptional in the predictablity of my own routines that i wish for - the reward for risking sometimes does not arrive...and i find myself lingering too long on the safe side
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you are a bold explorer :) thanks for sharing process and observation here.
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mocking sarcasm?
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no, i'm thanking you :D gratefulness and appreciation are characteristic of moi. you should know that. check the charts... [said playfully]
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i'm crawling back to my blanket fort for milk & cookies now
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(aomtemamce fees are die
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oh my.. my fingies slipped. well, have fun. take a flash lite.
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i'll take pics - need a tripod tho'
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is that a request for titillation?
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if you've got the tripod, i've got the bytes
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no tri pod here... lol
special effects?
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perceptual modifiers?
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