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Poem Number 1633
sure - if you'll hang out to shoot the shit :)
i'll soak up mood and take full advantage
of fine company and the opportunity to indulge our fancy
dip chips into a pool of ketchup with eyes saucer wide
as you bend at waist with the pool cue giving me a view !!!
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lucky bastard you would be ;b
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lol! i was thinking - you'd be the lucky one babe!
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yes, sir
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no baby, i'm a girl. uh... are you a girl too?!
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