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Gothic/Surreal - Two
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Poem Number 1056
a full moon burns holes in my heart
---Anonymous
what is left of my psyche is bits and parts
---Anonymous
the fits and starts have all fizzled away
---Anonymous
to reveal what is real, without the decay
---Anonymous
Commentary:
nice, keeps the mood
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ty, i figured this was more along the path you travel :) last night was clear here with a HUGE full moon on display.
-t
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big rock in the sky
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yes, it's the sun that lights the moon's cold pale face :)
-t
i would appreciate it if you would sign your handle going forward.
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sign the line, sign the comment
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sure :) deal.
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