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Gothic/Surreal - Two


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Poem Number 1056
a full moon burns holes in my heart
what is left of my psyche is bits and parts
the fits and starts have all fizzled away
to reveal what is real, without the decay


Commentary:
nice, keeps the mood
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ty, i figured this was more along the path you travel :) last night was clear here with a HUGE full moon on display.
-t
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big rock in the sky
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yes, it's the sun that lights the moon's cold pale face :)
-t

i would appreciate it if you would sign your handle going forward.
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sign the line, sign the comment
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sure :) deal.
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