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Gothic/Surreal - Two
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Poem Number 1055
a full moon burns holes in my heart
empty space filled with forever with lose
eternity is hard dark and so cold
your face is now erased from my soul
what we were and could have been now lost
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slam!? where there is breathe, there is hope. . .
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hope - perhaps. not always opportunity.
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