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Poem Number 1031
talking to myself... but then
no one is listening
Commentary:
trying to hear you... hello
what is it you try to say?
it's always the same strange experience
your mouth moves, i lean in closer
yet nothing i understand comes out
just strange fishes and japanese fantasy
a pregnant wife's belly gurgles
we swim in different seas, see
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