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Poem Number 1025
believably stupid is common place
i talk to myself and think i'm saving face
to genderbend and dance with strangers
creates an unfamiliar danger
that words i throw and tickle about
are fertilized by the observer's self doubt
to imagine you know who's keys are respondent
is to render your being nothing but impotent
Commentary:
intriquing
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free your inhibitions
www.youtube.com/watch?v=_-VIcYMaYWw&NR=1
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believably stupid is common place
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repeat yourself much?
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You make me better. Hold this head high.
Walk on. It won’t be long till I go higher.
Your hate makes me burn brighter.
Your ignorance is the door I walk through
Toward heaven.
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it may be too much to ask
of course it is - desperation hides the eminent arrival
of reality - a collision course of emptiness and self importance
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pour it out
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so - what's the question. maybe if you asked it you'd get a straight answer? or a gender bendered answer... lol. but an answer, nevertheless :)
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interesting poem voice, so flat given the subject matter. like the speaker is pooped out.
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pour the cognac - goes well with anything
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i prefer my cognac with white belgium chocolate
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i prefer mine with conversation and fumer
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leisurely :) mmm, nice!
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frantically so, how strange
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you chug cognac?! lol
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only the cheap stuff
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Hardy Red? $17 a bottle.
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paper not blue velvet wrapping right?
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lol, it all tastes pretty much the same
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you can burn the paper wrapper in a old barrel on the back forty at the end of the day ;) roast some marshmallows and chipmunks, too.
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