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Poem Number 1016
brightnoon
Commentary:
Him inside me moving slowly..
I knew the moment I conceived
The pleasure was so intense
I couldn't moan or scream
Instead my soul flew upward
Into a beautiful realm
I looked at us copulating below
For the briefest second
Before the angle touched me
Entered inside my soul
and We returned together
into his arm's embrace
tears streaming down my face
in rapture
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