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Poem Number 2570
feel the page move... ooooooooohhh yeah!!! baby !!!!!!!
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really appreciate you coming partially clean dollface ;) so, you are hung up on religion, like to pretend you have a dick then get offended when the baited party acts. you enjoy setting people up and yanking them down. you think you are SUPERIOR to others who are led about by unscrupulous internet poseurs. etc. wow. you are a self deceived piece of work.
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merci - mercy mama - such a glorious righteousness descends
where did the i have a dick come into it (no pun intended) - but it is a pretty good one...
a good roll in the hay is a spiritual experience baby and if you think that's a hang up or a set up what you're missing ain't gonna be filled by any or all the dicks in the world -
i assume a general "group fuck" here anyway - the every-other contributor is typing about the third dream from the left so the idea of a "dialog" is more like a group shouting-fest vying for airtime on the big screen-
'sides if you really wanted to get laid - you'd take you show on the road- there's no superiority here - and nary a pose assumed - so evaluation can only land in a pile on one's own keyboard...
it is captivating - to see a ripple in the sea of humanity - but the ocean is much to vast for it to make any real difference, i think
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just realize i come here to write and aren't truly concerned about the things you discuss. i'm not interested in vague online masturbatory liaisons :) i don't go around having internet interludes with men or women. i find you funny and easily manipulated.
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i am your origami -
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i don't know, it doesn't seem like that. you will do as you do. i have no control over you. no do i seek it.
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i personally would prefer we engage in true creative interaction instead of mass confusion.
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i find you funny and easily manipulated?
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