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Gothic/Surreal - One


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Poem Number 2538
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A Mozart CD brings birds
To afternoon’s open window concerto
Mr. Blue Jay hops on cedar bough
Muttering, flirting, he struts, vying
Stiff competition for a child prodigy

His head cocked, calculating distance
Making assumptions - I talk to him
But he just laughs and grins
Flashes astonishing blue wings
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