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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Five


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Poem Number 3778
Once
all i used to say was do
make it , move it, touch it
help it happen
especially to you
Now
I say don't
can't
especially to you

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and would never take what was not offered freely
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Poem Number 3779
don't mock my eyes
you know what they see
the best of a future
that's only imaginary
where love abounds endlessly

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Poem Number 3780
"Sadness"
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I love you so much it makes me sad
Dreaming of the life i once had
When things actually seemed to make sense
Kisses were meant to be shared by two lovers, such as you and I
why did you leave with so much time left for tue love to blossom

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J.L. Law - Seems to me I remember your name from years ago when I was around the site.. Do you ever see Grandma Rae or Llewellyn around? I apologize if I have the wrong person. Have a good day.
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Poem Number 3782
wide open empty
bed
stolen frozen broken
glance
true sight sounds just

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Poem Number 3785
V for venerated memories
A trace of accuracy for pruning
No thing but imagination
Querulous fantasies persist
Under siege and unyielding
Indigent and broken for love
souvenirs or sentimentality
hide debris or hubris

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