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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Five
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Poem Number 3750
Commentary:
i reach for the wisp
and grab the smog
clouded by
grime from some industrial strength disaster
choking would come, if i inhaled
i only reached
hoping, to catch a cloud
and got misasma instead
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