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Poem Number 3748
Is this what it takes
Love to break me down
All this time wasted
With my head hanging down
I never would of thought
You'd ever come my way
I never would of thought
Without chains you'd stay
Now i see even
The strong can become weak
Oh yes a damage heart
Can be taught tospeak
Is this what it takes
Love to set me free
All this time wasted
Not knowing the real me
so now you seei can never be there ture only real me
The me it takes to touch me with my moist hand
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so you are too afraid to invite anyone else?
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