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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Five


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Poem Number 3720
ABUSIVE NATURE


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For years now ive took more than my share
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Not once have i given up on your true self
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The punishment you inflicted was without fail
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Many times i cryed out to you for a sweet release
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But you ignored all my signs and all your hurt
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We both about crumbled all for your selfish fun
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No more abuse on this beautiful body that you own
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Give me a chance to show you true life
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The rest of our years will forever be young
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