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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 902
no surprise
Commentary:
trust that i know the secret you keep
the journey you're on and there is no place for me
it is seldom what is told that is the truth
but a painful gift that i see the magnificent you.
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i have never wished more for you, my friend
than that your path lead you to peace
and to be glad that you opened the window
thru which, to my own future, i could leap
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your story may appear to be an accident
but it was written, by your hand not by indifference
if there is more i may give than to just leave you be
know that you only have to ask it of me
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