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Salon of Solo Poetry for Critique - Four
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Poem Number 871
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my photo scares me. then i am proud. the woman looking back has the eyes that burn through you. she occupies a total bullshit free zone. she has been through the fire and come out glossy, diamond hard and maturely beautiful.
don't fuck with me assholes. my pimp hand is SRONG.
ROTFLOL
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keep on, playa, smacka bitch down. don't let em look at you diagonally, it's straight up and down, six-o-clock, sucka!
amber
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